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    38. Dialogue Tools: How Unexpected Dialogue Creates Intrigue for Your Audience

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    EPISODE DESCRIPTION:     

    This episode presents my final three favorite tools in a series on how to write great dialogue in your novel, screenplay, or play. These advanced techniques can transform the quality of one's project by making everything more intriguing and visual to the audience. 

    1. Use the Sidestep - answer questions in odd ways.

    • Unexpected dialogue or turns in dialogue create immediate interest
    • Answer questions with questions
    • "Do you love me?" "Do you want me to?"

    2. Use Silence or Action in place of dialogue.

    • Never use dialogue if an action can do the same thing.
    • Don't feel the need to always have your character speak. Focus on revealing the internal emotional state of your characters through action.
    • Action always trumps dialogue.

    3. Use Visual Images in place of dialogue.

    • Ex. Shane cuts down the tree stump instead of thanking them for a meal.



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