Over and Again...

Well, before we get into it I would like ask you for advice: What do you think of this podcast?Do you prefer a musical or literal translation?I would like to improve but I need some feedback, thanks.                          Loop & Loop by Asian Kung-fu Generation (アジアン・カンフー・ジェネレーション, Ajian Kanfū Jenerēshon?) "Loop & Loop" is one of the songs in the Nintendo DS musical game Osu! Tatakae! Ouendan. Lyrics and translation. migi te ni shiroi kami riyuu naki boku no e wo egaita tochuu de nage dasu sono hikaru ashita wo A white paper in my right hand For no reason, I draw my pictures and throw them out midway through That lights up tomorrow  hidari te yogashite na mo naki kimi no e wo egaita uchuu de deatta sono hikaru ashita wo tomedonai ao kieru keshiki owaru fuyu wo My dirty left hand Unnamed, I drew your picture and came across it in space That lights up tomorrow Endless blue, disappearing scenery, an ending winter  nuke dasu tobira wo shizumeru hidoi ame shimi komu kokoro no okusoko ni hibiite tayorinai ashita no hakanai omoi mo wazuka na hikari de kiri toru shiroi kage  The terrible rain submerges the door that slips away It echoes in the bottom of my permeated heart Undependable tomorrow's fleeting memory Is also a white shadow cut off from a small light  shosen tsuki sashite samayotte nuri tsubusu kimi no kyou mo tsumari endo & sutaato tsumi ageru yowai mahou After all, even this stabbed, knocked about, blotted out you of today Will ultimately end and start This gathered-up weak magic  yuen ushinatte samayotte tare nagasu boku no kyou wo hashiri dashita endo rooru tsumaranai imeeji wo kowase sou sa The reason; for this lost, knocked about, soiled me of today The end credits started to run Break this boring image That's right  kimi to boku de karamatte tsunagu mirai saishuu katachi no sono saki wo niau sedai  With you and I, the future begins to connect to The world that carries the last figure at the end  boku ga egaita sono kage ni kimi no mirai wa kasunde shimatta? Has your future that I wrote to this shadow grown hazy?  shosen tsuki sashite samayotte nuri tsubusu kimi no kyou mo tsumari endo & sutaato tsumi ageru yowai mahou After all, even this stabbed, knocked about, blotted out you of today Will ultimately end and start This gathered-up weak magic  yuen ushinatte samayotte tare nagasu boku no kyou wo hashiri dashita endo rooru tsumaranai imeeji wo kowase sou sa The reason; for this lost, knocked about, soiled me of today The end credits started to run Break this boring image That's right