polishing

Breaking down my revision process today, including sharing some interesting thoughts from crit readers on where I can improve as a storyteller, and a bit on content/developmental editing.

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Discussing my revision process today, how it works for me and what I learned about it in writing this book regarding revising with more than two POVs. Also a tidbit on what NOT to do with review requests.

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🐕 ⚡️ 我們無意教你如何做人，但可以告訴你怎樣做狗。這是「為所慾為」又一次介紹 BDSM 相關的內容。在本集中 Maki 詳細地介紹了自己前段時間嘗試做人形狗 puppy 的全過程。

沒想到第一次的實踐就是和一位非常資深的 handler，各種道具玩法樣樣都來。原來尿像黑啤酒混合中藥？原來被電擊只會爽不會痛？主人與狗之間不一定會有插入性行為嗎？其實Puppy Play 沒有想象中那麼簡單，人形狗也有分 Alpha，Beta 和 Omega 等不同種類，在與主人的互動之間也會呈現不同的樣貌。

如果你想要嘗試 Puppy Play，不妨聽聽 Maki 的第一手經驗！

P.S. 回鍋來賓日倫也不遑多讓，近日調教秘事拳交體驗悉數奉上，快按播放鍵吧。

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An alternative to writing with a wordcount goal-and how to know which method is better for you as a writer-along with words to search for when polishing, and a pervasive device I really don't like and why.

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How to know when a book is done: in terms of getting the story where you want it to be, revision passes, polishing, marketing strategies, etc. Also how to leverage that book according to what YOU want. 

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